very original, for a madness movie.
infact way too original.
a story where the main hero(?) and the creator/narrator collaborate to help him overcome evil madness enemies?
thats truly a wave of fresh air, in a sea of similar madness films! bravo sir! bravo!
i like this idea. stanley+the narrtor, going on epic adventures VS the villains of madness... nice!
(extra points for adding villains of your own, and not the standart sheriff/clown/known madness characters).
well my advice is that you should expand this idea into a series, and make this into a comedic series, making fun of popular madness themes, or just being about stanley+narrator overcoming ridiculous obstacles in the madness world.
oh, and i really liked the ''the frames where too fast, sorry'' animation joke, where stanley hit his head on the door. clever joke on the subject of FPS.
very good.
overall, im very pleased by this movie.
there where some grammar errors in the narration, and sometimes it was hard to know if the narrator or stanley was talking... (mainly due to stanleys words and the narrators words being both black letters. maybe you should make stanleys words green, or an other colour? just a suggestion here.)
very promising madness movie. i am very supportive of this!
do more!