nice. cool
its nice, i see you are getting better. but still, yo need some improve on to work. try to make the madness characters more well designed, and add the heads bigger, (in wider ! not the size) and better wide the bodies a litil bits, because they seemed a bit slim, and it was weird. as for the axe. draw it with slimmer lines, and make it a cool drawn tool. also add more weapons in the bussinessmak and make his have his bag, with some guns in, and a special weapons. and , sum mor things, ok? just try it. and instead of speakoni try to record your voice saying whaut the cloc was saying , other than that, it aws good. just work on those i told you, and it will be good. oh, and the part ''should we be friends?'' was a great stuff. cool 5