well, this was a good stormtrooper movie, with a few philosophical hints about individuality and the army...
this was a very good movie for your FIRST animation, so im quite impressed.
the characters were well-drawn, (even tho the face masks could be a bit more detailed, but still, this is your first movie, and also, i like their design, this means that this is your personal style, so you was aiming for drawing them in your own way, and not to actually replicate their helmet look and armour.)
as for the movie itself, it was good.
i would like to see more from you, you are a promising and cool new artist!
cheers!