chris-the-stick's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bob Saget]

very funny work, and nicely drawing of bob sagets face.
do more.

tonyfamous responds:

thanks. :-)

[Game Grumps: Ghost Butler]

i usually dont like game-grumps flash movies, or the overrated praise over this series, but you did a good job, and you turned this thing into something nice and enjoyable, which is a HUGE leap forward, considering the usual GG parodies that float around the place.
you did a funny, well-animated, nicely drawn movie, with nice face expressions, and great jokes in the animation. (even tho the audio was GG), it was good.

keep it up, and do more, you have skills my friend.

Steinberg responds:

Thank you very much! This is actually one of the game grump animations that I tried the hardest to make look good, and reviews like yours makes me see that the improvement is beeing noticed and give me nice incentive to always keep pushing the quality and improving my work!

[Ball]

nice style. i dont know if its a radical change from your old style, but this one is fast, well-animed and very fluid, so its a good style to keep/preserve.

nice little movie, and funny too, so yeah, keep making these!

Noisy responds:

Thank you!

No, it isn't so different from my old style but it's all a learning curve...

[Mega Sonic Bros. AF ep2p2]

this was good, with the proper use of sprites+animation+good use of backgrounds, thus building up to be a good animation, but the story is.... well-known.
sonic+super mario+DBZ+mechas? come on, whats next? super-naruto-man, along with bleach and megaman, following the trail of sonic in the battle for the delta halo?
come on, man. you have skills, thats certain, and your animation is good, and it also has subtitles, with is a huge plus, and it has a nice intro/design/animation going on, while all the sprites are used perfectly in the movie, but still, your problem is the story.
while the megaman+sonic universe is quite more original than alvin earthworks ''sonic+mario+SBZ'' old recipe, it stills needs to stand out of the crown a bit more.

make a NEW story, with maybe sonic doing something other than helping super-mario's princess.
dunno, make sonic going on an epic adventure in the future, to save, lets say his future-self from his enemy, shadow, or something, and he teams up with rouge to talk some sense into future-shadow.
or, you could make something even more different, and plan a movie that has a futuristic enviroment, and it shows how sonic's world has changed since aliens arrived in mobius and rebuilded the planet like a modern day atlantis, thus defeating eggman at his own game.

there are many ideas, but the combination of mario+sonic+DBZ isnt new or freash anymore.
i hope i am not rude or harsh to you, i just see that you have the talent, you have the SKILLS in sprite animation, and thats great, you also added subtitles which is a big step forward in a movie, and its bad to see that the only part of the movie that you seem to have trouble with, is teh plot/originality.

that is all, take ir or leave it, that is my advice. try a new approach in this. you have the skills, so you can do epic stuff.
or dont.

either way, you can do good(visually) movies.

RPGfan2005 responds:

Thank you for all your feedback. There's more than just the Mechas as an enemy. They are just the tip of the iceberg. But in know what you mean. By 2008 standards it was good. By now. It is saturated.

[Women power]

very nice visuals, and clever/pretty movie, with nice drawings/characters/animations, but this movie needs:

1. a preloader/play/replay button. if it loops, its not a very well organised movie.... despite its great graphics.

2. subtitles. i could not understand much if what they said, so this would need some english subtitles ASAP.

other than that, it was good.

NerdKats responds:

By this time we are not aloud to animate subs and the preloader button we are trying to get better please forgive us. Also we are putting the youtube direction so you can check them in english.

[TMNT: Just a mask]

clever role-play/twist on the (now) classic scene of the new TNMN movie, and you added...SQUIRTLE!
what a nice addition!
i liked the whole scene, and how the lady pokemon fainted.
very good, and just with the turtle joke going on, this could be a good short mini-series.

your drawings are crystal clear, cool+detailed and well done, and your animation is nice, and fast.
i like it. do more, you have SKILLZ.

Steinberg responds:

Thank you! I am very proud of the lines and details on this one, glad that people are noticing it, it always pay off to put more effort in my work :)

[Seinfeld - "The Yogurt"]

i liked where this is heading....
it looks good, it sounds good, and its funny.
my only advice would be to have some more action going on, and more jokes.
you should make more moviez like this, and maybe even add some more epic moments, like kramer's ''OPEN THE DOOR AND SLIDE'' move.
this must happen.

anyways, thats all, you do good stuff, so do more, this seems nice+promising.

DragonBallDavid responds:

Thanks so much! I appreciate it!
The things you mention are very helpful. I definitely want to work on putting in more action in my cartoons, as well as making them longer and include more jokes. I also plan on making another Seinfeld flash in the future, so I'll keep in mind the stuff that you mention. I would love to put in Kramer's open the door slide like you said! Hopefully I can improve on these things in the future.
Thank you for watching and leaving feedback! It really helps a lot!
-David

[FML-FTW Animation]

a good animation, and very cool, and swift, with nice animation, and cool characters.
this was very good, despite the (phenomenally) lack of colours.
i liked how you used the few colours that you had for showing the character's emotions, f.e., how the one of them was shy/blushin', etc .
it was cute, and well done.

it was very short tho, so maybe next time add a bigger movie, and maybe add some more stuff, like humour, and some other story going on as well...

keep it up.

Stoner360 responds:

Thank you so much. At the time I had a due date so. I wanted to make the animations more fluid and add more story but. that was the best i could do since i was only given 3 weeks.

[Spiders vs Zombies]

nice movie, and an interesting design of the kids look/faces and on the spiders/zombies/skeleton dogs.
it was interesting, and i was the one who saved this movie from judgement, so i feel kinda proud :)

you did a nice movie, so keep making stuff!

LevaBoy responds:

thank you very much, I will still working on more animations :D

[Shieldmaiden Part One]

very good cartoon, sir!
i liked all the drawings, the lineworks, the whole animation's style and speed, and the face expressions/character designs of all the characters, humans, and trolls alike.
i liked how you've shown the royal family, and the castle wizard(?) (the old guy with the white beard),
and i mostly liked the 2 adventurers that were in the forest, the huge viking guy who was scared of trolls, (the irony!), and his much smaller brother in arms, who was a bit more brave.

nice story, and it seems like the start of a good series.
please keep it up, and always add more humour in your stuff, it will be very good.

PiratePudding responds:

Thank you very much! :)
Glad you liked it!

A few misconceptions though: The Royal family is the village chief and his family, the old guy is the chieftain. The big blond viking (Harald) is afraid of the forest at night, and the braver (or more foolhardy) viking in blue is actually a girl!
Episode two is on the way, I hope you will enjoy the rest of the serie! :)