chris-the-stick's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[OTB - The Red Button]

hahahaha, once again, very good, and very funny!
i loved all the details on the panel, and on the GPS mechanism, but i also liked the details on the post-it notes, like the ''OTB collab for ma-(scratched) april'' or the get more post it notes, haha
very cool.

also i loved that you added my voice for pez/butt clock as well, that was fun, lol.
overal a great cartoon, and quite informative too, so that was good. do more!

RadioTubeClock responds:

Yup, it ended up working out that way. Thanks for the review!

[chicken and egg]

good creepyness, and nice drawings of both the old man, and his wife, but also of the chicken.
i liked the black and white contrast, and the story seemed ineteresting.
what was this egg? an egg with an EYE? or an egg with a clock on it?
and why was he trying to break it?

the ending was...umm incomplete?
you should do more in your next films, and maybe, you could add some humour in it, as well, it could be a nice surprise, in those type of films, you know?
anyway, good stuff, keep it up!

[Strawberry Clock II 2]

great movie, and with stunning visuals!
beverly hills cop meets strawberrius campaign in darklands, and combines those elements into a nice, comedic masterpiece of adventure and comedy, with some drama on the sideway.

good short flash, depicting the hard road of existing for 10 years in the portal!
great music, and funny designof the letters. good short.

[Super Smash Bros Z Ep. 1]

good movie, tho try making mario to be in talking animation when the voice starts, because from the part 1:07 to the 1:17, mario was not talking at all,(the voice was heard, and it was ok, but the sprite of mario stood still, in the punching tree pose, instead of being ina talking pose/opening mouth) and he was just stuck in the ''punch a tree'' pose for a long time.(instead of opening/closing his mouth to luigi, or at least to be standing in a different pose)
so, add more poses, add more story into this too,
(because honestly, if this is the same story of bowser VS mario, this will not get any awards for originality, and you should be original, if anything)
so add different characters, enemies, and or more (or DIFFERENT) elements in your story, and make this an original mario story at least.
also, if you could add some humour in this as well, it coudl be nice. luigi is always great for that.

anyway, that is all, other than those things that i pointed out to you, your part was good.
keep it up. you are p. good.

Smason responds:

Thanks for the criticism, I am adding more characters throughout the whole series and no, this is all Smash Bros, from N64-Brawl, It's in the basics position, thanks again for the criticism! :)

[Starburt]

hahahahaha, hillarious, i felt both bad for the little sun/star that had no friends, and for the people that it destroyed, oh man, that was very funny, please do more things like this, epic expressions, and a great animation overall.

FrankBooth responds:

Really glad you had that extreme a response :)

[Madness Madness 2]

in the start, this seemed like YET ANOTHER madness tribute, and a fight vs endless zombies, and then i saw zobie hank, and some other new zobies too.
the action was fast paced, and cool (was this FBF? and what was the FPS? 20?)
and everything went well, but in the end, something cool happened!
i liked it, and i must say that this was quite original. nice battle, and nice characters introduction.

ps. did you draw all of the characters, or were they sprites? either way, the animation was good.
tho if u did them, that was awesome. if not, still cool animation, and i enjoyed it, do more.

[Project: stick_episode1]

ok, good movie, and you did great drawings for a stick movie, i liked the character designs, the anime-style eyes, and hair, and the well-drawn weapons, and the keyblade, while the backgrounds were also good, and the fog effects, and the battle scenes were good.

also, the story, had some nice humour scenes, like the one with the letter, or the grandpas long narration.
tho, the story is similar to kingdom hearts at parts, and every new stick movie could use some originality man.
however, this story isnt exactly TOO similar to a kingdom hearts movie/game, so maybe there is alot of potential for this to become an original cartoon series....
so, in the next episodes, better focus more on an adventure with sticks, trying to liberate their homeworld from evil foes, and having original characters(like the protagonists friend, the red-hair dude with the uzi's, or the enemy with the straw-hat) and less K.H storyline.
tho, the keyblade idea should remain, just make everything else in the script different.

the movie was good, and the animayion quality and speed.
good movie for a series start, i enjoyed it, i justs hope that it will remain original and fresh story-wise in the next episodes, that is all.

keep it up!

Squarion responds:

Thanks for la review. I started out this project way back in 2006, but only started completing it now. We are just as cautious as you are to the storyline being too similar to the original KH, but I can guarentee that this isnt just a stick version and renamed Sora to Glenn, infact id consider Glenn to be completely different from Sora. The keyblade is practically the only thing kingdom hearts about it (no disney worlds, or familiar kingdom hearts faces like riku or kairi) . I hope you look forward to the upcoming episodes, as they will reveal the significance of the keyblade in this world, as well as many other mysteries.