chris-the-stick's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Space By Sam]

ok flash, and funny too, but i think it should have more action, and the movie should be bigger imo.
you have funny stuff tho, i loved the dino that said ''toasty!'' in the end.
make more stuff, but make the next film longer and with more stuff plz

[Socialist Economics]

ok, good flash, nice message, and a truly useful and educative message in the movie (very interesting, and quite easily explained, so you did good there), but i think that this mvoie lacked a bit in animation and/or presentation.

maybe, you should add some animation of how the things work, and or some cartoons, IF you want to put this on newgrounds.
(but only if you want to put a movie in here as an animation)
if you just wanted to show your class a small video/movie flash of how economy works, you could maybe upload it on youtube, or in the NG alphas(experimental movies), or in the NG portal, but labeled as a(n) ''experimental'' film.

it could be better, since the audience in here will not like a text-only movie in here.(and i can understand them, i mean this is an animation site after-all)
anyways, good work, and nice message.

just next time, add some animation/cartoons in it, if you want to submit it in here, because we are a flash cartoons site, and we like the presentations with some spice on them... haha :D

[Goku Walk Cycle]

hmmm...nice work, but this movie should have...more.
i know its a simple walking loop, but you could add a:

-preloader, a play/replay button
-more action in this?
-a story?

and stuff.

say, did you draw son goku all by yourself? if yes, that's an EXCELLENT work.
if not, and if it's a sprite, then, you used it in a good way, tho it would be cooler if you drew it by your own.

all in all, your experimental short is good, but i would like to see more.
you have the skill, now you just have to use it more!
keep it up mate, u r good! :D

A-Patrick responds:

Thank you :)
Actually it has a preloader, the file is not heavy at all so it loads quite quickly, but it's true that I converted this to a Flash format a bit quickly and didn't put a play/replay button on this. ^^'(The .mov file didn't work)

And yes I drew it all by myself (except the background), it's sort of a technical exercice, traditional animation and traditional clean, which took me a lot of time, only for this. So even if I like to do(and I do sometimes) animations with story and all, that was not the point on this one. ^^

[DeadlySpaceAction Mini #1]

hahaha, nice star-trek-esque action, great drawings, interesting faces/species, and good facial hair.
i like this series, it seems fun and cool.

keep it up, it looks good!

[MMT - 3 Guys Just Chillin]

ok, cool toon, and nice designs....
nice movie, make more, and make the next one longer and with another plot!
nice stuff

[FFV: Ghostly Feline]

hahahaha, nice joke, sylvester cat clock...?
haha

good one, and the drawing of phantom cat was REALLY good, excellent work.
worthy of a sequel... rly.
keep it up!

[FFV: Stormy Winds]

i was expecting a valentines-day flash, but thats ok, as well!
yes, the weather can be a really aggravating thing at some times....
but remain calm, and with some time, it will stroll away.... :)

nice little flash, and well-done, that is all :B

[WoT chort funny clip]

hmmm... the art was not good, but at least the story was good, and with a funny twist.
you have nice storytelling, but please next time, make a movie with more meaning, and maybe with more characters, humour, and stuff in it.

you can try, and you will start making good stuff :P

[flashflood2014: finale]

hahahaha, nice one!
perhaps this must be one of your best flash flood flashes of this year, and the most enjoyable, in both terms of funny jokes, AND in terms of epic adventure.
i liked how she ended in the dimension of eternal boredom(TM), and with her cunning wits and with her bravery, she saved the injured kombucha-clock from a boring, and horrifying fate!
the ending was fun as well, with catchphrases and stuff.
and the scratch disk sound(yay! again!1oneone) made me smile again, totally unexpected.
very funny, and good work, a great flash by you. do more.

[flashflood14: crystal pep]

nice little toon.
i liked grey clock's simple design (is there another? lol), and leek clocks style, you did that well.
also, the story was fun, and the music was cool.

good stuff, do more like this.
maybe make longer stories in some, but its ok.