very good. its nice
i must say that despite the how cold and scary it was (on the matter of how can a man with no resistance, or personal targets can easily be turned into a tool with the right guide, if i can tell this!) it was good. i liked the graphics. did you used any symbols, and also what was the subject of your school story? what it wanted to achieve? still, it has one good message on how someone can change one dude to do things against his personallity, if he doesnt has strength to get his own power to build the courage to overcome the powers that will alter his mind