chris-the-stick's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Super Smash Bros Z Ep. 1]

good movie, tho try making mario to be in talking animation when the voice starts, because from the part 1:07 to the 1:17, mario was not talking at all,(the voice was heard, and it was ok, but the sprite of mario stood still, in the punching tree pose, instead of being ina talking pose/opening mouth) and he was just stuck in the ''punch a tree'' pose for a long time.(instead of opening/closing his mouth to luigi, or at least to be standing in a different pose)
so, add more poses, add more story into this too,
(because honestly, if this is the same story of bowser VS mario, this will not get any awards for originality, and you should be original, if anything)
so add different characters, enemies, and or more (or DIFFERENT) elements in your story, and make this an original mario story at least.
also, if you could add some humour in this as well, it coudl be nice. luigi is always great for that.

anyway, that is all, other than those things that i pointed out to you, your part was good.
keep it up. you are p. good.

Smason responds:

Thanks for the criticism, I am adding more characters throughout the whole series and no, this is all Smash Bros, from N64-Brawl, It's in the basics position, thanks again for the criticism! :)

[Starburt]

hahahahaha, hillarious, i felt both bad for the little sun/star that had no friends, and for the people that it destroyed, oh man, that was very funny, please do more things like this, epic expressions, and a great animation overall.

FrankBooth responds:

Really glad you had that extreme a response :)

[Project: stick_episode1]

ok, good movie, and you did great drawings for a stick movie, i liked the character designs, the anime-style eyes, and hair, and the well-drawn weapons, and the keyblade, while the backgrounds were also good, and the fog effects, and the battle scenes were good.

also, the story, had some nice humour scenes, like the one with the letter, or the grandpas long narration.
tho, the story is similar to kingdom hearts at parts, and every new stick movie could use some originality man.
however, this story isnt exactly TOO similar to a kingdom hearts movie/game, so maybe there is alot of potential for this to become an original cartoon series....
so, in the next episodes, better focus more on an adventure with sticks, trying to liberate their homeworld from evil foes, and having original characters(like the protagonists friend, the red-hair dude with the uzi's, or the enemy with the straw-hat) and less K.H storyline.
tho, the keyblade idea should remain, just make everything else in the script different.

the movie was good, and the animayion quality and speed.
good movie for a series start, i enjoyed it, i justs hope that it will remain original and fresh story-wise in the next episodes, that is all.

keep it up!

Squarion responds:

Thanks for la review. I started out this project way back in 2006, but only started completing it now. We are just as cautious as you are to the storyline being too similar to the original KH, but I can guarentee that this isnt just a stick version and renamed Sora to Glenn, infact id consider Glenn to be completely different from Sora. The keyblade is practically the only thing kingdom hearts about it (no disney worlds, or familiar kingdom hearts faces like riku or kairi) . I hope you look forward to the upcoming episodes, as they will reveal the significance of the keyblade in this world, as well as many other mysteries.

[Where Patricks Dare]

magnificent, pat-tastic! snake defeating, awesomeness, man!
patrick did it again, and pwned the snakes.
what's more to ask in this masterpiece?

a sequel.

do more, nice stuff here.

biblo responds:

Mebbe

[Gaben's Notebook]

actually, its very well done, and very funny, good job man!
do more movies like this, i liked how you managed to nail mr.gabe's face and expressions, and i loved his little agenda, that had all of his daily tasks, and i liked how all the ''food'' tasks were ticked, and the ''do excersize'' task was left unticked/untouched, haha....

nice short, i liked it alot, do more animations, and stuff like this.
ps. the ''spy-clock'' was very clevrly done, nice!

RottenesK responds:

Thank you very much! :)

I upload more and better videos soon!

[The Joke Shuffler]

good movie mate, nice and fluid animation, and NICE 3-d-or (2-d?) animation effects, like the stickmen's movement, or the u.f.o, i mean the flying saucer scene.
good job.

do more.

WofkWengel responds:

Thank you, if you read the description you'll see that it is a really old video of mine.
If you want to see newer ones go to my YouTube channle :D
and the UFO is 2D. (used shape tweens) :P

[why single men shouldn't]

hahaha, i knew where this was going, but the ending was very creative!
is he a sleepwalker?

very funny, and well-drawn movie...do more!

silver8500prince responds:

thank you man :D and yes he is a sleep walker

[Doctor Blaind]

nice movie, with good visuals, fluid movements, and nice designs.
also the voice acting was great, and it was funny overal!
good job!

BruceyFlow responds:

Thanks a lot!

[Shae]

nice effect, needs more....more.
make a longer movie, man!

Veigas responds:

I will... thanks for the comment tho