chris-the-stick's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Immortals Part 2]

good work, and decent fighting scenes, but mate:

-add a preloader/play/replay button!
when the movie ends in a white background, it seems like a bad movie (and your movie is NOT a bad movie...)

-add more scenes
this was too short. 10 seconds?
you could add some more fighting scenes of scorpion VS liu kang, and have a few more fights with other enemies, until the appearance of pinball...

in short, this movie/series needs more fights, more length, and some story going on to reach the needed climax.

try these options listed above and your movie will be much better.
you can do it. you are good with the sprites, so organisethe movie a bit....

Little-Red-Bear responds:

Thanks for the review, youre right instead of the blank screen it should have said the end, i appreciate the advice friend

[PLimH E1 Dump Scaked]

interesting concept, and clever idea, but i would advice you to add some preloader/play/replay button, and to not have the animation loop, or it will give a bad image on your audience (it will seem rushed and spammy)...

also some subtitles would be nice, even tho it could be optional, i guess.

other than that, make the movie, longer, and you are set.
good plan tho.

[Me Playing : TF2]

nice, and adorable animation with cool face expressions and stuff.
nice moments of action, combined with alot of humour in this, and cool parts with jokes...
this is funny, and i quite enjoyed it, it was well drawn, witha fast animation style, and a cool story going on.
as for the gaming part; dont worry, im slightly better than you. maybe we shoudl team up in shooter games. :) lol! hahahahaha!

good work, plz do more.

[BABY]

so good work with this, and the final smiling face was so good that it creeped the hell out of me....
very nice work, i liked it!

do more

berntales responds:

Heheh sorry if I scared you chris, but i´m glad you liked it =P

[Tense Situation]

much better than the first movie, but it needs a bit more. add more conversation between the hero and the sub-zero (pun), and have a few fighting scenes, and slowly get back into the conversation by having the sub zero saying.... ''and now that we meet again, i have one last sceret to reveal to you...''
and BAM! do the skull animation thingy, and add some crazy music in it, and then credits, and roll the titles....

without an ending scene/credits, this kinda looks like a loop, and thats sad because you ahve potential with the MK sprites...
yeah. you can do ittttt

[Jungle temple - Animation]

good work with the 3-D.
minecraft?

heres my idea for the next film:
one guy goes to order a soda from a shop, and he gets attacked by a zombie!

[Business man & Guy]

funny, and interesting characters/story...
seems like a good material for a new series...it has potential.
do more!

TMJBtv responds:

Thankyou! And Im certainly thinking about it :)

[Putaseme]

he sure is brave!
excellent, and very fluid animation, despite the lack of colour in this...
good work, and quite entertaining....

keep it up! and do more, you are good.