chris-the-stick's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Metamorphose part 1]

good work, i liked her face expressions, and how her pupils dilated when she woke up, (great detail...!)
and i also liked how her body movement was so accurate and spot-on.
but still, i must repeat myself:
-add a preloader/play/replay button, because loops are not a very well-recieved thing in flash movies...
and
-add more scenes in your movie. in general, make a bigger movie.

good stuff tho. many skills in here!

[Metamorphose part 2]

very well done, but way too short.
maybe you could make the next movie a bit longer?
i can see that you have skills in animating, and thats why you get a solid 5-star, but still...
it needs more, in general.

more parts, more scenes, more...stuff.
and it could also use a preloader/play/replay button, to not look like a spammy loop.
that is all.

Nodegama responds:

I am still verry new to animation and thank you for your helpful advice.
The Program I used to create these animations is verry tricky to use (It's Pencil)
I tried to create one animation, but had to cut it into 3 pieces. otherwise it would crash before it would even trie to convert it.
Afterwords I tried to put those 3 parts back together but I was unabele because of my lack of programs that could read Shockwave Flash Files. -.-

Yea... I am only using freeware right now - crashing all the time -
I will trie to look into the start button thingy next time thou. Because You are right, The infinite loop is not realy the best. ( I yust did not know, how to ged rid of it )

[TD-Chocolate Rebellion]

nice episode, with nice metaphors, good visuals, and excellent face expressionsm as well as good depictions of life in school....
seems very interesting, and all the drawings/depictions/metaphors were very well designed.

as for the whole story, it was funny at some parts, and kinda sad in other parts...
good movie, nice series overall.
this was good.
keep it up, man!

[PLimH E3 Liv'in in a Head]

ok, this could be a nice series, tho a play button would be nice instead of the loop.....
and the general story/characters set is cute

original idea, and thats always good
keep it up

mars714 responds:

The problem is I don't know how to do a replay/play button... But if you want you can watch these on YouTube. (I put subtitles up there, BTW)

Thank you for the kind words.

[get the milk]

very well done, and creatively drawn, with fast and cool animation...
my only problem with this is the lack of a preloader/play/replay button, and the eternal loop.
makes it look like a spammy movie.

and its not. its a good movie.
you get my 5. keep at it!

[Small Spartans Ep.2]

very well done 3-D's, did you used machinima mods, or you did them on scratch?
nice real/3-D combination, in your movie, and seems very cool, funny and interesting to say the least.
this could be a neat lil series....

keep it up!

MonkeyNuke responds:

Just used the Halo 4 Green Screen walls in Forge which seem to go ignored haha!

Glad you like it!!

[The Dark]

clever, and quite enjoyable.
i liked the black and white lines design, and the swift movement of the animation.
also the conversation of the kid with the cat was very nice, and a cool part to observe....

this only needed a preloader/play/replay button, but other than that, it was GOOD.
keep animating, its nice

JoshSketch responds:

Thank you for the feedback!

[Immortals Part 2]

good work, and decent fighting scenes, but mate:

-add a preloader/play/replay button!
when the movie ends in a white background, it seems like a bad movie (and your movie is NOT a bad movie...)

-add more scenes
this was too short. 10 seconds?
you could add some more fighting scenes of scorpion VS liu kang, and have a few more fights with other enemies, until the appearance of pinball...

in short, this movie/series needs more fights, more length, and some story going on to reach the needed climax.

try these options listed above and your movie will be much better.
you can do it. you are good with the sprites, so organisethe movie a bit....

Little-Red-Bear responds:

Thanks for the review, youre right instead of the blank screen it should have said the end, i appreciate the advice friend