ist good, and very fun, i liked it. still, i think you should ad more, like making the peggey run away, and when egg finds it, he keeps it for himslef, seeing its cute, and then, green maple clock, chaseas him to the point he finds him, and shoots the egg. (and when he shoots the egg, instead of red it gets orange similar colour blood, cause its EGG.) and then, it ends, with ''noone steals my peggey, b***ch''. that would be fun.