chris-the-stick's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[NetDraw]

good job, man....

doing a programm out of a program, nice idea, just add the option of adding colour and making it easier to control and it will be great,also make more buttons.

Sythen responds:

You can add color...

[Midnight: Revenge]

it was good.....eh......but needs improvements.

it needs improvements, alot of THEM.you need to make the character to move in the direction you aim him for,you need to make some attacks to work, because some of them didnt work at all.you also need to do different controls,because you know that using caps lock, shift and home buttons, and tab and control is really unconfortable, not to mention that it does glitches.so, i recomend you using some of the words of the alphabet from there instead.for example, use a for first attack, h for second, j for third, f for fourth, m for fifth, and you get the idea.also, you need to make the level more easy to navigate.some time i get lost and im stuck on the wall, with no place to go, so make it easier to go in and play.also ,do a better background, a plot , like a scenario, nd in the end, put some interesting thing, like upgrades.also, adfd more music and do the preloader the bar more obvious, to see how much is loaded.....do these and it will be better.

demoninabottle responds:

thanks for the helpful feedback

[The Monty Python SB]

it was good.yeah.......

it was good for monty pythons fans.and im one of them.

BlueBlobClock responds:

Thanks python fan!

[Prismatica]

it was good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

it was good!!!! and orinall too.great work.yea

[highscore table w/cookies]

it was good....

it was good, and i guess its helpfull for those who want to do a highscore list, but i suggest you to make your tutorial better, to add a preloader, a play button and credits and stuff.so, like however, do these and it will look a lot better.just a kind suggestion.so, overall, its a good tutorial.

shade999999 responds:

Thanks for the review. These were all great suggestions, but I really don't think I need a preloader. By god man 48kb, it took the page longer to load than it did the movie. I really didn't expect my tutorial to actually pass though, so thank you a lot! I would add credits, but the only thing would be ME scrolling down, lol. Thanks for the review once again

[Float]

good.

its good, i guess,dude.yeah.

[Slipstream]

yeah, it was good.

it was good, and i really liked the intro scene, and the game was really good and had a plot, but, it was too hard to beat, even in the begginer cource, since the walls started to get everywhere.....overall a good game..yeah.

[Run to the Portal 2!]

it was good...but....yea

it was good ,but the only problem is with the control of the character, i mean, its too slow when i move it, and that results in me loosing some points.so, make the moving buttons move alot faster, because its very slow.also, make it more smooth, in the move,i dont knew, maybe add a shadow when it moves, whatever, and also , you should make it more interesting and challenging, with an another background, and/or a more interesting story.it was good, however.keep it up.

[K-FED: Dancing with Fire]

yeah,it was nice.

it was nice, but i didnt like the part were you punched the baby.i mean, its cool that you fighting against kevin federline, and yea, even britney ,but i quess the baby part should be excluded.still, a nice idea would be that if you beat kevin fed ,and you win ,then to make a scene were britney spearss appears like she looked like, fat and with an uglyface but to show that when the protagonist, the big black guy, sees her, to scream, and then to fight with her on one round.

[DotVille deluxe]

it was good, but.........

it was good, but the controls were pretty difficult to understant, even if i read the help section.still, about the control, you should make it like age of empires two, if you like the kind of those gamees, because i do ,and add some dot villagers ,yeah, that would be cool!!!!! (i think....) but with the difference that except moving your villagers, with the right-click button, to make them move if you press the left-click button twice (againn).
also you sould make and dots that are created from the smithy ,that with the ddifference thaaaaaat they are soldiers of your army.so, if you do a next version of this ,think aboouut this.
it will be cool.because, after round 5 it got alittle repetitive.bye.

finefin responds:

i don't know exactly what you are trying to say... do you want me to make a RTS game like AoEII? well, maybe in the future. DotVille gears to early economic games with symbolic graphics and gameplay... all graphics are "just" indicators of your success. I don't know how movable villagers should support the gameplay... but i will think about it.