good movie! its nicely drawn, detailed, and with a good animation speed!
marcello's face, (and his face expressions), and the avatars of the various girls on the chatrousex site/the face expressions of the random girl were also good, and pretty detailed as well...
as for the story, it started out as normal, with a good, (sexy?), boring thing, and then, the ending arrived, and... it was pretty dark, pretty dark, my good sir!
nice work, the ending certainly surprised me! :O
also, the fact that the movie had english subtitles was GOOD, and i thank you for that, this was a very good detail.
the only bad thing in this movie, was that it ended too suddenly. i guess thats the meaning of the movie, especially when it has such a dark ending, but still, a nice fade-out sequence and a slightly more obvious credits scene would be a nice touch. (just like mr OnlySlightlySane correctly stated below...)
other than that, its a perfect movie, with great visuals, fluid, flawless animation, and with a nice balance between sex, humour, and darkness.
if we also consider that this was your FIRST animation, then what can i say?
you are superb.
keep making flash movies, you are good!